might score or you might miss .There a it in the How to play hokey Explanations
Daisy
1 June 2021
My goal is to yous bossy verbs
How to play hockey .Hockey is a very fun sport to do . I love playing hockey there is one sube one each side you have a ball and a hockey stick. With the hockey stick you hit the ball to someone else then someone will hit it and push it then you they might be close to the gole you u might pass it to some or you hitgoal you re two goals on each side there is two team us and some other school each wednesday we have a game and every friday we have training. There is two goals one each side at halftime we swap side’s.
Hi Daisy i like the way you said at halftime we swap sides and how you put some bossy verbs in and as your goal.
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Hi Daisy I like your writing but however you mite want to edit it because
ReplyDeleteyour picture is in the middle of your writing and you mite want to put it at the bottom of your story and at the start it says
might score or you might miss .There a it in the How to play hokey so you should fix that but however it is great.